It started out simple
A face in the crowd
A shelter for a travler
A picture in a book
The simple life is so good
The taste of bread
The smell of air
And water
And peace
When things come to pass
That should not interrupt life
But do anyway for the sake of fate
Then the mind withers under the weight
I wish...
But nay, it begins anyway
The shreading of innocence
The influence of evil
The bending of his will
Ignorence... Innocence....
No love anymore.
None left to spare for him.
Time drags on mercilessly
Along with evil
Corruptong kills his former self
Hibernation
Disruption from disgused good
He moves once again
Evil seeking evil
But dragging good with it
The good is beaten,
Butchered,
Used,
Lost...
Long this carrys on
Noone sees the good
Thus shuns it
Foolish not to try and find it
But they don't know it's there
Tired eyes open again on a new, yet tortured age
On the evil again
Good also
Scorning also
Will none help?
Someone tries
They are killed
Beaten
Cursed
Evil twists the mind of the innocent
No help anywhere
Another trys,
But is carrying a burden too great
The same evil
No help
No help
Will you?
I tried
I can't reach
Pulled back
Tears
A different story
Finally, twisted and butchered
Driven to the very end
A last thought of the old life
The peace
Then death
But who cares?
You?
Most likely not
It is a hard choice
Many do not make it
Me?
This is a tribute
To all faces in the crowd
Shelters to travlers
Forgotten pictures in books
And him
Yes him
May he find his peace in death
His lost friends
His lost generation
His lost life that could have been
Will you hope for the lost?
Or will you hope for the found?
It is a hard choice
Some make it
Will you?
















Comments
Anyways, nice poem^^
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English doesn't borrow from other languages; English follows other languages down dark alleys, knocks them over, and sifts through their pockets for loose grammar.
-James Nicoll
I am the butter on the toast of lies!
"Smeagol, Why Does It Cry Smeagol!" oh god *cries*
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" No One Dies a Virgin, Life Screws Us All"
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my pokemon brings all the boys to the yard
they're like
'you wanna trade cards?'
dern right
I wanna trade cards
I could beat you I've got charizard
I am really proud of how this one came out, though. I'm glad you read it, too. It's nice to have some constructive critisism from a good poet like you.
Sometimes I just wanna give that little bugger a hug.
It's awesome...^_^ better than my first two poems..((One was about Gollum..one was about smeagol...{{Actually one was about the gollum in the Hobbit}}))
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my pokemon brings all the boys to the yard
they're like
'you wanna trade cards?'
dern right
I wanna trade cards
I could beat you I've got charizard
--
my pokemon brings all the boys to the yard
they're like
'you wanna trade cards?'
dern right
I wanna trade cards
I could beat you I've got charizard
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